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My Tree Sparrow

January 17, 2017 2 Comments

My Tree Sparrow

By Andrew Ough-Jones

Upon the winds my Tree Sparrow flies. Out yonder to the fleeting sunset. Never flailing, nor tiring, he chirps encouragement to the clouds, wings forever beating.

His white cheeks puff proudly, chirruping at dawn atop the hedgerow where he builds his nest. And to my Polly he does call.

She asks him, “Where have you been, Tree Sparrow?”

“Germany, France, and Belgium!” he replies. “Over fields and oceans. I would love to take you!”

“I would love to come!” Polly flirts, pruning her whiskers. “But I cannot, for I have no wings.”

“Pity,” says my Tree Sparrow. “You are worth it.”

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  1. A. J. Nahajski says

    January 17, 2017 at 12:23 pm

    Almost a poem! Beautiful poetic language which has an old-fashioned tone to it, reminiscent of traditional nursery rhymes and folk tales. Lovely.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    January 18, 2017 at 8:45 pm

    I’d definitely call this a prose poem–and a darn good one at that! Good job!

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