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Nature

February 5, 2022 14 Comments

By Lydia Storm

They were old and forgetful but both loved nature. Passing in the hallway, he’d say “gardenia” and she “chrysanthemum.” Every day was a new life, so they could see who they remembered in one another. Prom dates, spouses, secret lovers. They began favoring floral perfumes and the strong colors of summer gardens, she birdlike in a yellow jumper, he treelike in a bright-green cardigan. It was he who started the practice of waltzing after lunch. The green tree and the yellow bird. His hand held out to her, her delighted gasp, their bone-deep rhythm, their whispers as weightless as hummingbird wings.

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  1. J Sagar says

    February 5, 2022 at 5:26 am

    Great!

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  2. Helen C says

    February 5, 2022 at 7:42 am

    Beautiful story!

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  3. albertkatz says

    February 5, 2022 at 8:15 am

    Beautiful and evocative.

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  4. Kevin says

    February 5, 2022 at 8:19 am

    Superb! You certainly have a way with words.

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  5. Shoshauna says

    February 5, 2022 at 9:36 am

    This is enchanting! And it proves a story needn’t have tension to succeed. I just learned something new. Thank you, Lydia!

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  6. Kathy Carroll says

    February 5, 2022 at 9:59 am

    Stirring expression of nature and human nature! Lovely!

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  7. Vivian says

    February 5, 2022 at 10:23 am

    Beautiful!

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  8. A.M. McKnight says

    February 5, 2022 at 12:22 pm

    Vivid imagery. Good job.

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  9. Sue says

    February 5, 2022 at 1:18 pm

    Beautiful! You certainly can paint a picture with words.

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  10. Christie C says

    February 6, 2022 at 12:27 pm

    What a lovely story, thank you for sharing this. 🙂

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  11. Nina says

    February 6, 2022 at 2:02 pm

    So beautiful!

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  12. Alastair says

    February 8, 2022 at 1:31 am

    Ahhh, that’s so sweet! ?

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  13. Ronni says

    February 9, 2022 at 3:03 pm

    images are beautiful

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  14. Patricia Smith says

    February 10, 2022 at 9:12 am

    I love this. Thank you!

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