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Near Death

October 5, 2016 7 Comments

Near DEATH

By Kageha

Midnight and I was still wide-awake.

“There’s only one thing to do,” I said, to myself. “Eat.”

I held my breath as I passed Mother’s room, just in case she was listening for me.

Dashing into the kitchen, I gulped frantically for air. I’d counted twenty seconds; no wonder I wasn’t on the swim team. I nearly died!

After recovering slightly, I swung open the fridge door and the dazzling interior light revealed to me, glorious…nothing! Well, two carrots and an onion. Gross.

I stood transfixed, deep in misery and even deeper in starvation— My second near-death experience in one night.

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Comments

  1. avalinakreska says

    October 5, 2016 at 9:42 am

    Such a believable scene. Haven’t we all been there? Great!

    Reply
    • kageha says

      October 5, 2016 at 2:27 pm

      Lol, your speaking in past tense, it never ends, mum just changes to someone else. Thank you.

      Reply
  2. jj says

    October 5, 2016 at 2:12 pm

    Nice, I liked the dramatics ,,, well done.

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    • kageha says

      October 5, 2016 at 2:40 pm

      Thank you so much

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    October 5, 2016 at 6:26 pm

    I’ve always been a confirmed nighttime snack eater, so I can easily relate to this story. Well done.

    Reply
  4. Karen Yoostem says

    October 6, 2016 at 7:30 am

    Wonderful! ‘Near death’ indeed. I feel like that whenever I do something sneaky too!

    Reply
  5. Pascal Inard says

    October 7, 2016 at 5:31 pm

    Brings a new meaning to the concept of NDEs, minus the flashbacks!

    Reply

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