By Marc Littman
My wife and I play a game while stopped at red lights. We dissect pedestrians crossing the intersection with the sharp scalpel of our wit.
I’ll point to a woman wearing Day-Glo orange. “Divorcee on the prowl. Check her slutty clothes and makeup.”
“That moron’s a drunk,” my wife chimes in. “See how he wobbles? And it’s only noon.”
But one day we picked apart an aging dowdy woman pushing a shopping cart loaded with all her possessions. She suddenly stopped in front of our car and pounded on the hood.
“At least I have a life!” she cried. “Do you?”
An interesting twist at the end!
Yes is awesome!!
I enjoyed the twist in the tale.
Nice.
Fantastic I love the woman great twist great writing
Hah! That couple deserves to catch heck. Good for that lady!
Nicely done, Marc
Wonderful write.
Unexpected end.
Maybe they would start minding their business.