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Nobody Visits

November 21, 2015 6 Comments

Nobody Visits

By Nick Dunster

We pretended we were happy, but she hated teaching and she hated me even more for doing nothing. And then one night someone climbed up onto our flat roof.

“Listen,” she said, sitting up in bed and pointing at the ceiling. “What’s that?”

“A bird?” I whispered.

“Some bird!” she said. “You need to go investigate.”

I lay there terrified, listening to the heavy footsteps above. I should probably admit here that I’ve never been the bravest.

“Well there’s really no need,” I said. “I’d recognize that sound anywhere. That,” I said, rolling over to feign sleep, “is most definitely nobody.”

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  1. Christina Butcher says

    November 21, 2015 at 9:41 am

    well done! I love this story simply because it lets the characters be their cowardly selves.

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  2. fiftywordsdaily says

    November 21, 2015 at 9:43 am

    Totally different to the author of course – who is completely, ahem, fearless! Thanks Christina!

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  3. Bill says

    November 21, 2015 at 3:44 pm

    Very funny. Really enjoyed it.

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    • fiftywordsdaily says

      November 21, 2015 at 4:36 pm

      Cheers Bill

      Reply
  4. SJ Geiger says

    December 27, 2015 at 12:24 pm

    “That is most definitely nobody.”

    What a delightful truism. I love this quote!!!

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    • fiftywordsdaily says

      January 4, 2016 at 5:44 pm

      Sorry I’ve not replied before – thanks very much. Really appreciate the feedback. All best wishes, Nick

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