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Number 20151209298

January 17, 2022 7 Comments

By Sally Wagner

20151209298. Fay recognized the number as soon as it showed up on her arm cuff. She felt a lump in her throat. Not again.

Sitting on the edge of 20151209298’s desk, Fay took a closer look at the chart. Tooth number twelve, worth two dollars. 11:30 p.m. Way past bedtime for a ten-year-old. But 20151209298 was still lying awake. Motionlessness. Listening for those echoing footsteps outside the door that she and Fay had heard time and time again. Fay sighed and spread her wings. She would have to come back later, to pull the tooth out from under the tear-soaked pillow.

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  1. Helen C says

    January 17, 2022 at 8:07 am

    Heart-wrenching tale – brilliant.

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  2. Coco says

    January 17, 2022 at 8:33 am

    So much said in what is not said.
    Nicely done!

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  3. Kevin says

    January 17, 2022 at 10:22 am

    A very clever story, brilliantly written.

    Reply
  4. Soleah Sadge says

    January 17, 2022 at 10:23 am

    oh wow! Powerful.

    Reply
  5. Elsa says

    January 17, 2022 at 1:38 pm

    God. That hurt. Well done.

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  6. ren says

    January 18, 2022 at 7:14 am

    beautiful

    Reply
  7. Richard Temple says

    January 19, 2022 at 9:45 am

    Owww 🙁 powerful and heartbreaking

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