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Numbers Game

August 15, 2016 5 Comments

Numbers Game

By William Shaw

Sesame Street was surprisingly accurate in its depiction of vampires.

The capes and fangs are true, but so is the maths obsession. That’s why a circle of salt works as protection. They spend so long counting the individual grains they don’t have time to eat you.

I’ve tested this statement, and can confirm.

The creature hunched over our grotty kitchen floor, fingers so thin they blurred in the air, was there four hours before sunrise.

A pile of dust, mingling with the salt.

I stood up, breath still fast and shallow. I’d expected the shaking.

But I hadn’t expected the singing.

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  1. lquisp says

    August 15, 2016 at 10:18 am

    Wow!!! Wonderful… I really liked that… creative and creepy.

    Reply
    • mrwilliamshaw says

      August 15, 2016 at 10:37 am

      Thanks very much! I aim to please.

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    August 15, 2016 at 12:06 pm

    Nice, humorous twist on the Dracula theme, William. Enjoyed it muchly.

    Reply
  3. Madi Parker says

    August 16, 2016 at 12:56 am

    Nice! I liked the subtlety and depth. Much communicated in few words.

    Reply
  4. jfxmcl says

    August 20, 2016 at 9:54 am

    Very inventive, well played.

    Reply

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