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October 18, 2016 5 Comments

On Top

By Simon Hole

I lost track of how many times I tried to convince her to get help, tried to tell her she wasn’t invincible, that it would catch up with her sooner or later.

She’d never listen, just laugh and tap me on the nose. “Don’t be such a worry wart,” she’d say. “I’m fine. You know I always come out on top.”

Damn her. So now I’m standing in this stupid black suit in this stupid graveyard listening to ‘Sorry for your loss’ over and over and over.

Sure, sis, you’ll always come out on top. Except when you’re six feet under.

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  1. Parker says

    October 18, 2016 at 9:06 am

    Powerful story.

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  2. Carrick says

    October 18, 2016 at 11:31 am

    Well done, Simon………

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  3. azsalinas23 says

    October 18, 2016 at 2:29 pm

    Well, damn. Very nicely written.

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    October 18, 2016 at 5:59 pm

    You came through like a champ, my friend. Always a pleasure to read your stories!

    Reply
  5. kageha says

    December 14, 2016 at 1:29 am

    the tone is easy to digest, you know where its leading but you still get surprised when your there

    Reply

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