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One for the Road

July 12, 2017 6 Comments

By Constanée Malik Hemedi

I look into your eyes, unwavering. You hold my gaze; that surprises me. I didn’t think you could surprise me any more. I had always hoped I could save us. I have improved. I used to think I could save the world. I leave that up to others now. Revised expectations.

But us, it shouldn’t have been so difficult. It wasn’t; it was impossible. And so, I save myself. You don’t drink; your religion forbids it. But me, I forbid myself nothing. I raise my glass; I wish you well. One for the road. One for the rest of my life.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    July 12, 2017 at 1:55 pm

    Love that beautiful, unexpected ending. Great job!

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    • Constanée Malik Hemedi says

      July 13, 2017 at 7:20 am

      Thank you for your encouragement!

      Reply
  2. Frances Halstead says

    July 14, 2017 at 4:57 am

    That is lovely Connie, it really touched me.

    Reply
  3. Gabriela Zahner says

    July 15, 2017 at 8:51 am

    How sad, but yet so strong at the same time. Statement made, time to move on.

    Reply
  4. hanna brockmeier says

    July 21, 2017 at 12:16 am

    How very deeply touching. Keep going

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  5. Charmaine Pohl says

    July 28, 2017 at 12:54 am

    Poetic and thought provoking. Very on point. I loved it.

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