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One Last Spin

April 20, 2015 5 Comments

One Last Spin by Emily Clayton

By Emily Clayton

“One more and I’m done. I swear it this time.”

I stood near my battered ride, staring at the stately spread before me. I wanted to retire, but this abode was too exquisite to overlook. I keyed the code and slipped to the side entrance.

“Hey!” A brisk barking voice approached from the right.

A sob escaped my throat. “Oh!” I wailed. “Help me!”

The naive boy saw my face, anger morphing to tender concern. “Ma’am? Has someone hurt you? Please, come and get warm.”

As he led me indoors, a faint smile crossed my lips. All part of the plan.

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  1. Firdaus Parvez says

    April 20, 2015 at 6:29 am

    I enjoyed reading this. Well written, and I’m curious to know what come next. Well done!

    Reply
    • Emily Clayton says

      April 20, 2015 at 11:58 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  2. bunmioke says

    April 20, 2015 at 6:43 am

    This piques my curiosity on what came and before and what’s next. Nicely done.

    Reply
    • Emily Clayton says

      April 20, 2015 at 12:00 pm

      Thank you very much! I’m happy you liked my story.

      Reply
  3. DeRicki Johnson says

    May 7, 2015 at 8:13 am

    Enjoyed reading this story. The protagonist is quite the charming manipulator. Wondering if she might charm her way into a spot of trouble… 😀

    Reply

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