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One Last Time

May 3, 2016 5 Comments

One Last Time

By Manheim Wagner

He sat there near the door with the oxygen tube connected to his nose. We’d spent over an hour putting on his shirt, a pair of pants, and shoes.

“Bud, I don’t think I can do it,” he said and sat back down.

The sunlight streamed through the window and the smell of begonias wafted in through the screen door.

“I wish I could see Belgium one more time. Those two girls made bikinis from our old army sweaters,” he said.

“Did you ever go to France?” I asked.

“No,” he laughed, wheezing and coughing. “The French fuck with their feet.”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    May 3, 2016 at 10:50 am

    This one is well written; but I suppose I’ve led a sheltered life–for the life of me, I just don’t get it.

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    • dbpela says

      May 3, 2016 at 10:59 am

      Old WWII song- “The French they are a very strange race, parles vouz, They fight with their feet and they fuck with their face….” Grandpa got a little mixed up i think.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    May 3, 2016 at 3:22 pm

    Thanks! Now it makes sense, and I like it!

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  3. Barb says

    May 3, 2016 at 7:21 pm

    I knew and loved this man. Good memory.

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  4. John Kay says

    May 3, 2016 at 11:26 pm

    From strength to strength, Mannheim.

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