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Opa’s Ordeal

January 20, 2021 3 Comments

By Erin Bauer

His journey to warriorhood began today. Like all Mawé boys, thirteen-year-old Opa had prepared. Dozens of bullet ants collected from the Brazilian rainforest were sedated and woven into gloves he’d wear for this rite of passage. With his body and face painted, he bravely watched as tribal elders slipped the ceremonial gloves full of twisting, incensed ants onto his waiting hands. Opa felt the venom’s paralyzing effects as ants pierced his flesh relentlessly. He danced, enduring intense, excruciating pain. Ten minutes later, it was over, his hands numb, swollen, and shaking. This ritual 20 times, and he’d be a man.

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  1. Deborah Burke Henderson says

    January 20, 2021 at 1:45 pm

    Powerful!

    Reply
  2. David Berger says

    January 20, 2021 at 9:45 pm

    Not impressed. This has little to do with the kind of courage required in our world.

    Reply
    • BB says

      January 21, 2021 at 4:41 pm

      I suspect that’s partly the point.

      Reply

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