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Our Ghost

August 27, 2024 10 Comments

By Rebecca Klassen

I know David hears it because he also rolls over and stares at the ceiling. It’s thudding erratically in the attic. Back to back, we try to ignore it and sleep.

At dinner time, as David and I search for conversation, it sends a spoon clattering to the kitchen floor between us. David replaces the spoon without a word.

Putting the house on the market is instinct rather than a conversation. We view new builds; nothing with history.

During that first evening, we unpack boxes in separate bedrooms and realise it’s followed us, roaring in the silence between David and me.

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  1. Laura Besley says

    August 27, 2024 at 8:22 am

    Really enjoyed this, Rebecca!

    Reply
    • Rebecca Klassen says

      August 27, 2024 at 10:33 am

      Thank you, Laura

      Reply
  2. Liz says

    August 28, 2024 at 4:33 am

    What a clever and evocative narrative. Well done.

    Reply
    • Rebecca Klassen says

      August 28, 2024 at 6:49 am

      Thank you, Liz

      Reply
  3. Lisa says

    August 28, 2024 at 7:05 am

    The tension is visceral. Well done!

    Reply
  4. Ed Kratz says

    August 28, 2024 at 12:06 pm

    Well done. Such subtle implications.

    Reply
  5. Deborah Sale-Butler says

    August 28, 2024 at 7:00 pm

    Nicely done – getting so many layers into such a tight story.

    Reply
  6. Phyllis King says

    August 28, 2024 at 9:19 pm

    Wow! Says so much in so few words. Well done!

    Reply
  7. Charlotte Bennardo says

    August 29, 2024 at 11:56 am

    I love a good ghost story!

    Reply
  8. Chadd Lin says

    September 28, 2024 at 8:07 pm

    More terrifying than an actual ghost!

    Reply

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