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Out With the Old

August 7, 2018 10 Comments

Out With the Old

By Ellen Kirkman

I’d had no luck the normal way. Searched catalogues, perused the internet; I had even gone to the hospital to enquire.

At last, when Dodgy Derek from downstairs accessed the dark web for me, I found what I was looking for in the form of a glossy advert.

The webpage promised speedy delivery, with all items in stock. There were so many to choose from: glossy untainted ones; bloody misshapen ones; slow-beating ones that were steady and sturdy. Mine was useless. Broken.

I called the number on the screen, put in an order for a heart the advert said was unbreakable.

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  1. throughthecolouredglass says

    August 7, 2018 at 7:43 am

    Ah! Don’t we all need one

    Reply
    • EllenK says

      August 22, 2018 at 7:52 am

      Indeed šŸ™‚

      Reply
  2. Glenn Bowman says

    August 7, 2018 at 8:11 am

    This story reminds me of the country song by Jessica Andrews; An Unbreakable Heart. Good job, Ellen.

    Reply
    • EllenK says

      August 22, 2018 at 7:50 am

      Thank you Glenn šŸ™‚

      Reply
  3. glkamens says

    August 7, 2018 at 9:35 am

    A taut, touching tale, Ellen. Hope there’s no later buyer’s remorse.. Jerry,

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    • EllenK says

      August 22, 2018 at 7:51 am

      Thank you Jerry. I hope so too šŸ™‚

      Reply
  4. rachelnewcombe8 says

    August 7, 2018 at 6:21 pm

    Love it, great pacing.

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    • EllenK says

      August 22, 2018 at 7:51 am

      Thank you Rachel!

      Reply
  5. Shoshauna says

    August 8, 2018 at 2:27 pm

    Wouldn’t we all like one! Super story!

    Reply
    • EllenK says

      August 22, 2018 at 7:52 am

      Thank you šŸ™‚

      Reply

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