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Outbid

May 6, 2019 2 Comments

Outbid

By Coco Jane

Justin searched eBay: rings, earrings—there! That necklace. Perfect. $19.50. He could spend up to $30 for Brooke. That would show Marcus—Borman, or Bogemill or Brantly, or whatever his name was—that senior that Brooke couldn’t stop ogling.

Justin bid $22.50.

Someone named MBoggs bid $27.00.

Justin $28.00.

MBoggs $29.00.

Justin bid $30.00. He held his breath.

MBoggs bid $32.00.

S**t!

Justin bid $33. 36. 38. $42.50. Victory!

The next day, Justin heard Marvin apologize to Brooke, “I bid on eBay on a necklace for you, but some jerk bid it way up.” Brooke smiled and crooned, “That’s okay, MBoggs.”

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  1. Paula says

    May 6, 2019 at 11:17 am

    Really liked this one. Been there.

    Reply
    • Carol says

      May 7, 2019 at 11:16 am

      Yes, indeed, the ways we compete for one another’s attention. The sting of rejection is real.
      Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply

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