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Outside Jerusalem

April 13, 2021 12 Comments

By Michael Slagle

Today, we lunch at a small roadside restaurant just outside Jerusalem. Our waiter, who looks strikingly like the Eurocentric Jesus pictured in the Baltimore Catechism back when I was a believer, approaches our table with a basket of bread and a stoneware pitcher. He places the bread on the table and asks: “Water, gentlemen?”

“Please,” my companion says, licking his parched lips as the waiter pours the inviting clear liquid into his glass.

“And you, sir?”

“Make mine wine,” I quip.

Unwavering, he tilts the pitcher over my glass and fills it nearly to the brim with a deep garnet liquid.

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  1. Deborah Ellsworth says

    April 13, 2021 at 8:12 am

    Wow. And I have discovered a lovely, worthwhile site in the AM. On Facebook of all places! Thanks, Mr. Slagle!

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  2. Bogdan says

    April 13, 2021 at 11:01 am

    Brilliant, just brilliant!

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  3. Vivian says

    April 13, 2021 at 11:45 am

    GREAT!

    Reply
  4. Derek McMillan says

    April 13, 2021 at 1:12 pm

    Very good

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  5. Constanée Malik Hemedi says

    April 13, 2021 at 1:45 pm

    Lovely story, we could do with a few miracles right now.

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  6. Scott Brian Blanke says

    April 13, 2021 at 3:08 pm

    Enjoyed it

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  7. Rebecca Garnett says

    April 13, 2021 at 9:48 pm

    Wow! Found this story quite poignant and moving??

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  8. Laura Besley says

    April 14, 2021 at 1:12 am

    Really like this!

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  9. Stella Klein says

    April 14, 2021 at 5:10 am

    Neat and entertaining. Great.

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  10. Ronni says

    April 14, 2021 at 1:55 pm

    Wonderfully vivid

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  11. Dhananjay Bapat says

    April 15, 2021 at 9:03 am

    Vividly awesome!

    Reply
  12. Beena says

    April 20, 2021 at 2:41 pm

    Unique short story , Brilliantly written

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