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Overthrown

July 11, 2019 5 Comments

Overthrown

By Coco Jane

“Michelle, you’re pitching next inning,” said the softball coach. “Go warm up.”

Michelle put on her glove and stepped behind the dugout.

“I can catch for her,” offered Lisa’s dad.

“Thanks, Jerry,” said Coach. “Gloves are by the bench.”

“Nah, won’t need one. She’s just fifth grade.” Jerry hitched up his belt. He strode behind the dugout and squatted about 35 feet from the little pitcher. The ball was bigger than her hand.

Two pitches later, Jerry reached for a glove with crimson hands. He resumed his squat.

Michelle struck out the side. Jerry held two ice-cold sodas while he watched.

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  1. Dolores Johnson says

    July 11, 2019 at 2:30 pm

    Great story! Cute ending! Thanks for sharing.

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    • Carol Sanders says

      July 11, 2019 at 5:16 pm

      Thanks! This actually happened. Michelle is my daughter. (Okay, the two sodas part did not happen. But it made a good ending detail.)

      Reply
  2. Mary E Falkner says

    July 12, 2019 at 3:47 am

    Ha ha ha! Loved it.

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    • Carol Sanders says

      July 12, 2019 at 10:24 am

      Thanks! Always good when the small can show up the big.

      Reply
  3. Dante A Murray says

    July 13, 2019 at 9:37 am

    Real life, expressed and well crafted honestly.

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