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Pack Animal

March 15, 2017 3 Comments

Pack Animal

By J G Pelling

I’ve learned to interpret the misery of my neighbour’s dog through the walls of my flat. His ‘I need a dump’ whine. His frenzied yapping for the post. His howl when abandoned all day. It goes through me more than it does other folks.

I fed him special steak and special words earlier. Pausing on the page’s last Braille dot, I hear the scratch of a key. The door slams: they’ve been drinking again.

Surprised gasps turn to screams which end in choking gurgles. The wet ripping noises and crunching come later.

I smile. Nice doggie has got a new alpha.

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  1. ianrennie says

    March 15, 2017 at 2:20 am

    Very nice. Telling the story through sound means we have to fill in the gruesome details in our own minds.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    March 15, 2017 at 12:02 pm

    Scary. Nice job!

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  3. Firdaus Parvez says

    March 18, 2017 at 11:16 pm

    Oh nice and gruesome!

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