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Patient Care Report

August 19, 2025 8 Comments

By C.

Adult female, approx. 23 y/o, found supine, unconscious. Police recovered a 9mm semi-automatic HG near patient’s right hand. Where did you even get that?

Pt unresponsive to stimuli. Gross cranial trauma with large exit wound noted at apex of pt’s skull. Cardiac monitor confirmed flatline in all leads. My cherished symphony, ceased. Dried blood noted on pt’s face, scalp, and surrounding area. No resuscitative efforts were initiated due to signs of prolonged death.

Body released to county coroner. No further EMS intervention required.

Nothing found on pt’s person except a handwritten note. It was addressed to me.

I’m sorry.

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  1. Rob says

    August 20, 2025 at 8:59 am

    I want more! I know it’s flash fiction, but I want to know who this patient was? What did the note say?? How did the emt deal with this??? Very concise and powerful story.

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  2. David Higham says

    August 20, 2025 at 11:34 am

    Intriguing

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  3. PK says

    August 20, 2025 at 2:04 pm

    Hard hitting with a sting. Well crafted.

    Reply
  4. Alex says

    August 24, 2025 at 1:21 pm

    Heartbreaking, moving, and great work.
    Good write, C.

    Reply
  5. Lynn M. Rice says

    September 25, 2025 at 10:26 pm

    Clever!!

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  6. John says

    January 5, 2026 at 12:15 am

    This is disturbing and quite frankly weird. Can only think it’s a personal thing.

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  7. Sarah Armstrong says

    January 12, 2026 at 9:27 am

    The emt probably dealt with it with the mindset of how it’s just another report to write, LOL. My brother used to see things like this all the time. Once you see and experience things like this over and over in that kind of profession, it becomes just more reports to write at the end of the day. He would have them piled up sometimes with how busy a day could be.

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  8. Alice L. Smith says

    January 19, 2026 at 2:29 pm

    C,

    are you ok?
    Is this a cry for help?
    Is this a fantasy novel about your own self?
    Is this something to seek help for?
    I don’t think this is a joke.
    Call 988.
    They should be able to help you.

    Reply

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