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Perfect Clementines

August 15, 2024 3 Comments

By K. Rose Dallimore

Just as morning begins to drip from the speakers in the kitchen, I drop the crate onto the marble counter. The top glides open, revealing twelve fruits in a neat stack. I pick one up. No pores, no bruises. Clementines have been smooth for three years now. The average person prefers the experience of glossy, perfectly spherical fruit. I place it in the peeler. After a mechanical growl, twelve pithless slices slide onto my plate—deveined and exposed like flayed muscles. I pop one into my mouth. The best clementine I’ve ever tasted. I’m not surprised. Things improve all the time.

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  1. Caroline Thomas says

    August 21, 2024 at 6:41 am

    A beautifully-written, well-honed piece about how our food is being engineered. It expresses perfectly the discomfort I feel about that, while, with misgivings, enjoying the results.
    Thank you. This is a big issue that needs to be talked about.

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  2. Ed Kratz says

    August 24, 2024 at 8:24 am

    Lovely. A perfect example of sub text.

    Reply
  3. Kate says

    August 28, 2024 at 6:19 pm

    Beautifully succinct. Good writing. Well expressed.

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