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Persevere

December 5, 2021 6 Comments

By Lauren Hacke

Mari would fabricate a goal at the beginning of each year, then immediately forget about it. However, it was 2020, a fresh decade, and Mari swore to achieve her resolution: to persevere. Vague, but uncomplicated, right?

Then it came. Mari couldn’t waitress or run outside. She looked after her son twenty-four/seven. Persevere. Mari combed the internet for jobs, jump-roped, and faithfully tried to explain the art of subtraction.

Her trembling hands dropped the phone when Mama whispered, ā€œI’m infected.ā€ Mari picked her phone back up. Persevere.

She wrote her job application and the tear-stained obituary with the same pen. Persevere.

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  1. Helen C says

    December 5, 2021 at 7:58 am

    This sums up 2020 for so many people.

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  2. Alastair says

    December 5, 2021 at 8:08 am

    Oof. Can really feel that one!

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  3. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    December 5, 2021 at 10:27 am

    Can really empathise with this one… well written… kudos…

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  4. JJ Collins says

    December 5, 2021 at 11:02 pm

    Subtle, but strong. Well done.

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  5. Mary A Gorman says

    December 6, 2021 at 6:10 am

    Beautifully written and I could feel the pain and pride in the last line

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  6. Walter & Jacqueline Hacke says

    December 7, 2021 at 7:55 am

    We are amazed! So much maturity for a 15 year old girl!
    Grandpa, grandma

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