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Peter and Louise

March 29, 2017 4 Comments

Peter and Louise

By Claire FitzSimmonds

Peter was 45 when he married Louise. Pale-haired, half his age, dress seemingly formed of flower petals.

She promised not to nag him about his spinach intake. He’d hike mountains with her if she’d stay up late with him.

“We’ll live well,” they vowed. “If not long.”

And twelve years isn’t long, not when they’re over.

“Quality,” Peter says, after they’ve left the oncologist, “is maybe a little bit tied to quantity. Sometimes.”

“Maybe,” Louise responds.

Maybe love feels this short for everyone, those who first held hands 65 years ago and those who brushed thumbs yesterday. She laces her fingers through his.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 29, 2017 at 6:19 pm

    Nice. Gives one a warm feeling. Like it.

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  2. Melissa says

    March 30, 2017 at 12:06 am

    Wonderful! Love the phrase ‘brushed thumbs.’ Irrelevant, but I know at least two couples named Peter and Louise….

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  3. Esme upon the Cloud says

    March 30, 2017 at 1:05 am

    So touching. This will reach out to very many people. Well done.

    Reply
  4. sueannporter1 says

    March 30, 2017 at 10:48 am

    Nice story

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