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Pilgrims

February 13, 2016 4 Comments

Pilgrims

By Joel Nagy

We did not come as conquerors—we came as asylum seekers. Fleeing our war-torn home.

The natives, brutal savages as they were, relentlessly fought our progress to better this land. It was our manifest destiny that drove us to discover this world, to develop its full potential.

I write this log as our last record. The savages of this world have risen beyond their primitive means because one of our own gave them power not meant for their unclean hands.

I pray that this log finds home with my kin, far away, as a grave warning: ATTEMPT NO LANDING UPON TERRA.

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  1. Jennifer Freed says

    February 13, 2016 at 9:06 am

    Fun read. I was expecting the speaker to be a European colonist.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    February 13, 2016 at 9:23 am

    Yeah, the ending surprised me, too. Good story.

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  3. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 13, 2016 at 1:06 pm

    Good ending says me too.

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  4. Kate says

    February 14, 2016 at 8:22 am

    Nice! I love endings that make me want to go back and reread immediately to recontextualize.

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