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Please Stand Back

December 31, 2020 4 Comments

By Amy O'Neil

You always knew she’d go. Like a train that isn’t scheduled to stop at your station, she whooshed past making her own wind.

You remember tucking precious hairs behind her ear as she recounted dreams, before they were lost strand by strand with each morning coffee.

Everything ached. Words became tiresome. She grew light, wispy.

You miss her quiet apologies for disappearing.

When you catch the scent of her honey-bergamot shampoo, you whisper her name. Even though it’s impossible.

You leap out of the carriage and the train doors slide shut.

In her powder-soft shadow you are running, staggering, stumbling, falling.

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  1. Susan F. Reid says

    December 31, 2020 at 9:40 am

    Touching love story.

    Reply
  2. Kevin says

    December 31, 2020 at 10:08 am

    Simply superb.

    Reply
  3. Deanna Salser says

    January 6, 2021 at 3:30 pm

    You can feel that.

    Reply
  4. Emily says

    February 8, 2021 at 9:54 am

    Beautiful.

    Reply

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