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Plummeting

November 14, 2018 5 Comments

Plummeting

By Mercy Brewster

Heavy boots broke the night’s silence, and Reuben knew it was time for him to fly with Isaak to safety. In darkness they ran for the Rabbi’s basement and a secret hatch that led to the river. Reuben knew: he’d designed this very ghetto. Soon black ice water held and lifted them aloft.

But the boy, unable to swim, thrashed hard.

“Let me hold you,” Reuben said.

Isaak, disregarding his father’s instructions, floundered.

“Don’t let go,” his father pleaded. Freedom was close enough to taste.

Isaak, ignoring his father, plummeted downwards into the depths, bearing with him his father’s last dream.

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  1. cascondaville says

    November 14, 2018 at 10:10 am

    This is so sad!

    Reply
  2. David Derey says

    November 14, 2018 at 5:35 pm

    I loved it…. Well done, man

    Reply
  3. Brian says

    November 15, 2018 at 3:29 am

    Powerful story.

    Reply
  4. Glenn Bowman says

    November 15, 2018 at 7:26 am

    A powerful heartbreak.

    Reply
  5. Paula Edwards says

    November 16, 2018 at 8:55 pm

    Icarus and Daedalus? Well done.

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