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Pluto

March 25, 2016 4 Comments

Pluto

By Len Kuntz

My daughter dyed her hair gray today.

She says I should call her ‘Grandma.’

She says, “I am older than the trees, the sun, even older than Pluto.”

She says the college boy was only experimenting, that this is what millennials do now.

She says, “I miss how you’d tell me stories at bedtime. I believed they were true.”

I say, “But why the gray hair?”

She says, “You should listen better.”

She says, “Here—lean in, let me bite your earlobes; see if you don’t feel it.”

I relent, do as I’m told: too old or dumb to ask questions.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 25, 2016 at 9:32 am

    A very warm, heart-felt experience, reading this story. Great job, Len!

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  2. Jennifer Freed says

    March 26, 2016 at 4:03 am

    This is haunting and also beautiful. It reads like a poem. I’m not sure I’m correct in my interpretation of the story but I like the uncertainty, how it keeps me thinking
    Jennifer

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  3. majokmindfuleating says

    March 26, 2016 at 6:50 am

    fourth line says it all

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  4. Paul Beckman says

    March 26, 2016 at 5:00 pm

    Good read, Len

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