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Post-Gravity

March 16, 2016 6 Comments

Post-Gravity

By Sarah Vernetti

Once upon a time, things had weight. They rested on the floor or on surfaces. Sometimes, they were too heavy to lift: even full-grown men needed help moving large objects, like couches or armoires. (Those are examples of what they called furniture.)

As the standard part of any check-up, children were weighed at the doctor’s office. And their weights were recorded on paper. This all sounds crazy, but trust me.

There really was a time, long ago, when everything clung to you—mass was held down by an invisible force—and even the lightest feather would eventually float back to Earth.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 16, 2016 at 10:32 am

    A kind of tongue in cheek look at what it might be like to be weightless. Good story, but let’s hope this one doesn’t materialize in real life!

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  2. jlcourtney says

    March 16, 2016 at 10:46 am

    Lovely ending!

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  3. Tom Hadrava says

    March 16, 2016 at 12:20 pm

    A charming idea indeed!

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  4. Jennifer Freed says

    March 16, 2016 at 4:35 pm

    Nice. Without being heavy-handed your narrator expresses as perfectly natural his/her own reality, and the oddness of what we take for granted. The last line is beautiful.

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  5. Perry McDaid says

    March 17, 2016 at 1:35 am

    Delicious premise where the only disappointment was that it ended too soon.

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  6. Sarah Vernetti says

    March 17, 2016 at 1:42 pm

    Thank you for the kind comments!

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