By Nina Miller
“Sweetest of fruits with the thickest of skin,” said Toby, peeling a sumo orange.
A slice was placed into my outstretched hand. One arm steered, one eye on his handsome face.
I devoured it. Let its sweetness cover my lips. Let juices slide past fruity pulp as I chewed.
“Good, right? Expensive, but worth it,” said Toby, holding another slice. “More?”
I wanted everything. The fruit, the man, and a life together. Shouldn’t have stayed friends when I’d fallen in love.
“I’m good,” I told him, hoping that lie gave time for my heart to harden so I wouldn’t turn bitter.
Nina, very nicely done! Always liked unrequited love stories.
Nina, very nicely done! Always liked unrequited love stories. Also, love the title—very clever.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. I love when a title brings it all together!
The orange analogy was really clever: peel it back and reveal the nuances.
The specificity of a “Sumo” orange was a great visually and tactilely intentional choice.
Thank you!! I only learned about them this past year and enjoy them so much. I am glad that it added to the story.
Most relationships stand on quicksand ?
So difficult to stand your ground without getting lost. Boundaries are important in that regard.
Nice and visual. I could see the scene. Also very relatable.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Clever title and wonderful (metaphorical) first line! I was intrigued from the get go.
Cheers to thick skin when our hearts ache. Congratulations!
Thank you so much for reading and your kind words! I am so glad you enjoyed it.