
“Whaddya need? Megaphones? Fire extinguishers? Chainsaws? More ski masks?”
“Balaclavas.”
“Whatever. It’s a two-minute concert. Tops. You don’t have to sing well. It’s punk. Just scream. Then riot cops clear the stage.”
“Our performances are unauthorized.”
“Right! That cathedral thing! Genius! Putin must’ve pissed himself!”
“Only vivid illegal action brings media attention.”
“So I’ve heard. How many grrrls you got now?”
“Membership varies.”
“So recruit. Think there’s only one Blue Man Group? They’re an army! You’ll be the opener. Worldwide tour. Stretch-limos. Exclusive merch’—maybe a breakfast cereal. Beats turnip soup in the Gulag. Am I right? Or am I right?”
Yep I like a lot and am obviously familiar with the story. Think the style of writing captures the event well and relates
Thanks for the kind words, John.
I like it, it’s well pulled together. (There’s a name for that, but I’m a bit aphasic right now. Forgive!) Good story!
Awww. Thanks, Sue. I appreciate your kind words.
Good story, John; title might be a mite “course”…
Thanks, Bobby. Debated over the title, decided “Riot Unlimited” didn’t have the same elegance that I was after.
This was really inventive. Liked the rhythm. Great dialogue. Clear voices. Good work!
Thanks! You made my day, FloridaGrrrl!