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Reality Sucks

January 14, 2016 6 Comments

Reality Sucks

By Perry McDaid

He hadn’t much cared for his body for a long while. It showed. He always avoided looking at the mirror on the way in and out of the shower.

It had been twenty years since he lost her. He had been young and fit then: an adoring acolyte.

There had been no explanation, only a void where she used to be, and more closet space than he knew what to do with. Together with the empty drawers, it mocked him until he could stare no longer.

A girl with a glorious smile opened his eyes. Organs tingled.

But the mirror laughed.

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  1. alphabetstory says

    January 14, 2016 at 10:03 am

    Never saw that coming!

    Reply
    • Perry McDaid says

      March 27, 2016 at 9:22 am

      Glad to surprise

      Reply
    • Perry McDaid says

      March 27, 2016 at 9:23 am

      Glad to surprise.

      Reply
  2. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    January 14, 2016 at 5:07 pm

    Great work Perry! The ending is what really got me!

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    January 16, 2016 at 9:40 am

    That’ll teach the guy to remove all the mirrors from his house! Nice job, Perry.

    Reply
    • Perry McDaid says

      March 27, 2016 at 9:21 am

      thank you

      Reply

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