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Red Shirt

March 7, 2018 5 Comments

Red Shirt

By Robb Lanum

Dan likes to wear a red shirt, drive to some random Target in the middle of the day, and just start ordering people around.

In the car afterwards, Dan and Z-104 cling to those same songs from high school. 1986. You give love a bad name.

Dan thinks about his soon-to-be-ex-wife. He thinks about that girl in high school he’d never had the nerve to call. It’s funny: he can’t remember her face exactly, but he can still remember her phone number. That long dial tone.

Dan drives to another Target. People there listen to him more than his kids do.

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  1. Roy Dorman says

    March 7, 2018 at 10:04 am

    Good one, Robb. The mental picture I get of Dan in his red shirt makes the story sing.

    Reply
    • Robb says

      March 7, 2018 at 7:49 pm

      Thanks for the kind words, Roy

      Reply
  2. Joy Jordan says

    March 7, 2018 at 4:16 pm

    What a nice read. I enjoyed your story Robb and that song now is stuck in my head. 🙂

    Reply
    • Robb says

      March 7, 2018 at 7:50 pm

      Thanks, Joy. And you’re welcome!

      Reply
  3. River says

    March 9, 2018 at 2:44 am

    How droll (In a good way). Love it!

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