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Reflections

February 18, 2015 4 Comments

Reflections by Krystyna Fedosejevs

By Krystyna Fedosejevs

My last words infuriated him. I admit to stubbornness, arrogance, not to lack of commitment. Blame myself for the ensuing silence between us.

“Go on with your life,” he hurled, “I with mine.” As if the two years we were lovers meant nothing to him. Perhaps they didn’t.

I’m learning to go forward. Refraining from reflecting on what was or what could have been. Tucking memories of us into the past.

Phone rings. Machine answers. A man’s voice resonates. His.

In the comfort of my couch, a cat arches its back feeling gentle strokes. My tears no longer mat its fur.

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  1. Bruno says

    February 18, 2015 at 5:55 am

    Suggestive story about a personal emotional problem. I like the ring of authenticity in it.

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    • Krystyna says

      February 18, 2015 at 8:40 am

      Thank you Bruno.

      Reply
  2. paul beckman says

    February 18, 2015 at 6:49 am

    There are always those “after calls”. You handled this one nicely.

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    • Krystyna says

      February 18, 2015 at 8:43 am

      Thank you Paul for reading and commenting. Your opinion, that of an accomplished author, means so much to me.

      Reply

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