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Relentless

May 16, 2017 2 Comments

By J.J. Landry

“These guys are relentless!” Tristan screamed to no one in particular, as the bullets, like hail, fell down range. After thirty grueling minutes of fighting, the shooting stopped. All that remained was a field full of blood and smoke. Few Marines had been killed during this engagement, but in Tristan’s estimation close to 200 enemy soldiers were lying dead around them. He was pretty confident at least a dozen of them had been felled by his Browning Automatic Rifle; he was damn proud too. Hail started to pour down on them again in the Pacific. No, now it started to storm!

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  1. Ritchie says

    May 18, 2017 at 9:46 am

    This piece was well written. I enjoyed reading about the action, and knowing the thoughts and feelings of one person.

    Reply
    • J.J. Landry says

      May 21, 2017 at 11:39 am

      Thank you! I’m glad you like the story.

      Reply

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