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Rescue

March 3, 2021 25 Comments

By Charlotte Langtree

The scarlet-scaled dragon snored as Agnes tiptoed through the cave, her slippered feet silent on the cold stone floor. Her heart raced, but he didn’t stir. Such an easy escape surprised her, but not as much as the figure, sword in hand, awaiting her in the bright sunlight.

Agnes ran to her arms. “Mother? Where’s Prince Oscet?”

Rolling her eyes, her mother said, “Faffing. As usual. I won’t wait for him when my daughter’s in danger.”

Agnes grinned. “What happened to the dragon?”

“I fed him the town drunk,” her mother chuckled. “Even dragons can’t see straight after that much moonshine!”

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  1. Kathleen Keane says

    March 3, 2021 at 1:27 pm

    ‘Mother to the rescue’ – just in time for a Mother’s Day gift. What a delight!

    Reply
    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 1:51 pm

      Thank you Kathleen! I’m glad you like it.

      Reply
  2. Constanée Malik Hemedi says

    March 3, 2021 at 1:42 pm

    A nice little modern fairy story with a feminist twist.

    Reply
    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 2:00 pm

      Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  3. b. says

    March 3, 2021 at 1:43 pm

    Well written short story. Yeah, I vaguely recall – very vaguely – a couple of episodes after too much moonshine.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 1:58 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  4. Bill D says

    March 3, 2021 at 4:02 pm

    Very clever and different in a tightly wrought package. Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 4:25 pm

      Thank you. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  5. Cassandra Cassandra Hamilton says

    March 3, 2021 at 5:15 pm

    Cute scene. I enjoyed it.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 6:02 pm

      Thank you. That’s great to hear.

      Reply
  6. Ryker Hayes says

    March 3, 2021 at 5:34 pm

    Haha! Love this! Anything with a dragon in it is going to be great.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 6:01 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  7. Rita says

    March 3, 2021 at 6:38 pm

    Love this, Charlotte! Nice job.

    Reply
    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 6:47 pm

      Thanks! That’s lovely to hear.

      Reply
  8. Annabelle says

    March 3, 2021 at 8:01 pm

    Wow. I enjoyed this immensely.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 10:08 pm

      Fantastic! Thank you so much.

      Reply
  9. Liz says

    March 3, 2021 at 11:45 pm

    Ha! lovely 🙂 Shades of Angela Carter’s Bloody Chamber – nice!

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 3, 2021 at 11:49 pm

      Thank you so much Liz.

      Reply
  10. I.R.Pathak says

    March 4, 2021 at 10:33 am

    The plot is full of innocent suspense. Nice it is, Charlotte.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 4, 2021 at 10:40 am

      Thank you. I’m glad you like it.

      Reply
  11. Kim M. says

    March 5, 2021 at 12:52 pm

    Brilliant story! Gorgeous sensory details and a good dose of humor.

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 5, 2021 at 4:08 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  12. Lydiaq says

    March 7, 2021 at 9:22 pm

    What does faffing mean?

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    • Charlotte Langtree says

      March 8, 2021 at 6:15 pm

      Wasting time doing unnecessary things.

      Reply
  13. Stacey says

    March 10, 2021 at 6:36 pm

    Mother to the rescue, naturally ?

    Reply

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