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Respect

January 28, 2022 10 Comments

By Coco Jane

Mom pulled Jacklyn to the kindergarten room.

“Welcome to open house!” said Mrs. Marsh, smiling. “Hi, Betty. Jacklyn is the last of the family, eh?”

“Yes, number four,” said Mom. “Jojo, this is Mrs. Marsh.”

The teacher squatted down. “I’m so glad you’re coming into kindergarten. Do you want to be called Jacklyn or Jojo?”

“Jacklyn.”

“Oh, no,” insisted Mom. “Jojo is so much cuter. We’ve called her that ever since her brother Darren pronounced it that way when she was born.”

“Jojo it is, then,” laughed Mrs. Marsh.

“Come along, Jojo,” said Mom.

“My name is Jacklyn,” she said softly.

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  1. Alastair says

    January 28, 2022 at 8:33 am

    Hah, yes. Good one. I feel for that poor kid.

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  2. Tom says

    January 28, 2022 at 11:44 am

    Good story. Says much about communication between parent and child.

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  3. Tom says

    January 28, 2022 at 11:46 am

    By the way, any connection between JoJo and Coco?

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  4. albertkatz says

    January 28, 2022 at 3:54 pm

    Well done. You said so very much in so very few words! Excellent.

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  5. Laura says

    January 28, 2022 at 8:31 pm

    I work with kindergarteners. I see other teachers acting this way and it eats away at me. I try to hold respect in my heart for every child, every day. This piece hurts. But it’s a necessary hurt. Thank you.

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  6. Coco says

    January 28, 2022 at 10:52 pm

    Tom got it right.

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  7. Helen C says

    January 29, 2022 at 1:38 am

    Perfect construction. Loved it

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  8. Nina says

    February 1, 2022 at 12:41 pm

    Well done! I really feel for Jacklyn.

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  9. dlherrmann says

    February 2, 2022 at 10:51 am

    My sister wasn’t able to use her name until she married. I understand this.

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  10. Nancy Rule says

    February 2, 2022 at 12:43 pm

    aww – i like the “she said softly”

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