By Teodora Vamvu
Respectfully, no, I don’t want to sit on your right hand side under the altar’s flowered arches as you face his flawless face with that knife sharp jawline and say “I do” to the one that chose your Jolene-like auburn locks over my unfashionable pixie cut and your sparkling hazel eyes over my mouse brown irises and your perfectly flat abdomen over my stubborn rolls of adolescent fat and your razor-sharp wit over my dull, rusting blade humor but you are my best and oldest friend and I can’t say no to you so instead I say that I’d be honored.
Excellently written! A full story not just in 101 words, but in one perfectly delivered sentence. Well done!
Thank you so much! <3
Great single-sentence story.
Nicely done!
Thank you so, so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much!
Loved this. A continuous stream of consciousness, written brilliantly. to convey even more between the words than just with them
I have to bow my hat to Mr Phillip T. Stephens, editor extraordinaire for some of the great wording choices he gave me and his insight.
I am so glad you liked it! Thanks a bunch! ??
Just brilliant!
You’re too kind, thanks a lot! ?
Whoa! Held my breath as I read that. Well done!
Hope you did let go of holding it eventually, ha ha. The adventures and dangers of reading prose!
Thank you so much for your kind comment! ?
Excellent! Like a painful punch to the gut, but a beautifully written one. Great job.
Thank you so much, greatly appreciated!
Fantastic writing and all in one sentence. Well done!
Thank you! ??
All that voiced in just one sentence… well done ???
Thank you kindly! <3
So much in so few words.
All of it in one sentence, or at least I tried 🙂 thank you!
This story already has a lot of positive comments so I will just add that I enjoyed it too. It is no easy task to put the whole story into one sentence 🙂
Never too many positive comments althought negative ones or critique is always greatly welcome and appreciated too.
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Love it.
Respectfully, thank you. 😉