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Retiro Station

February 18, 2016 5 Comments

Retiro Station

By Prospero Dae

Buenos Aires, 1989.

I stood on a platform in Retiro Station looking up at the vaulted ceiling, when a flock of mustard-breasted birds broke the chapel-like silence so fully enveloping me. But soon she would arrive as though stepping off a cloud—tall in a sleeveless dress as black as a bear’s nose, her fey hand trying to keep in place a red-ribboned hat—and in the crush I would lose sight of her, and yet she would suddenly be in my loving arms; but my muse failed to show up, again, and I was destined to have another unproductive day.

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    February 18, 2016 at 12:06 pm

    She was probably the wrong Muse for you…maybe Calliope or Terpsichore…but you don’t need a muse of Epics or Dancing; you need a muse of Poetic Flash Fiction. I hope you searched, and found, a new one. A lovely—full of longing—piece.

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  2. Bruce Goodman says

    February 18, 2016 at 11:33 am

    Maybe the Muse was too gorgeous. A hint of frumpiness in a frock could possibly have begun something beautiful…

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  3. Susanne says

    February 18, 2016 at 3:45 pm

    That was 1989 and this is now. You won!

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 18, 2016 at 4:56 pm

    Ah, Prospero, you have perfectly described some of my “unproductive days”. Thank goodness, I don’t have very many of them! Good job.

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  5. tomorrowdefinitely says

    February 21, 2016 at 10:47 am

    what an exciting place to meet your Muse and how very appealing she sounds! And I’m quite certain she is with you wherever you go 🙂

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