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Returning Love

January 21, 2020 7 Comments

By Kate Casper

Mara wanted to thank her mother. But the scarf would never look any good on her. Should she tell her? No. She didn’t want to appear ungrateful. Should she return it to her mother? No. A returned gift is painful. People think it’s a repudiation of their love.

But she’d been taught not to lie.

She picked through her note cards and selected one with damask roses, the color of the scarf. Mara’s least favorite color. The pen wobbled over the paper.

Thank you for thinking of me. Your gift is a blessing.

She left out one word: mixed. Honest mistake.

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  1. Sharon says

    January 21, 2020 at 7:19 am

    So clever!

    Reply
  2. Cathy Cade says

    January 21, 2020 at 7:46 am

    I love it.
    I also find it hard to gush over something I don’t like, but struggle not to seem ungrateful or hurt someone’s feelings. A lovely compromise. Sadly, too late for this year’s thank-you letters 🙁

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  3. Rosemary Johnson says

    January 21, 2020 at 7:57 am

    Oh what a pity! Missing words. Every writers’ bugbear!

    Reply
  4. derekmcmillan1951 says

    January 21, 2020 at 2:27 pm

    I know what that is like!

    Reply
  5. Kate says

    January 22, 2020 at 11:18 am

    Thank you for your comments. Love your takeaways.

    Reply
  6. Rachel Why says

    January 23, 2020 at 4:13 pm

    -a perfect illustration of all the pitfalls of gift giving.
    So often the “giver” has no idea the amount of anguish they are also giving.
    Very well done!

    Reply
  7. Mary E Falkner says

    January 24, 2020 at 7:25 pm

    Well done

    Reply

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