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Riverbanks, Dreaming

August 13, 2025 3 Comments

By Steve Saulsbury

Ever since learning about his ancestor, the slave trader, Gary began exploring tunnels. Imagining a literal escape route: dripping candles, a creaking handcar on muddy tracks.

Little explorations at first, plunging his fist into a groundhog hole, hoping to touch a stub of wax. Then a natural cave, wishing for a scrap of Lowell cloth or a broken chain.

Pushing along riverbanks, dreaming of coded blankets. Gary imagined aiding travelers, guided by the North Star. A black rope tried to pull him back, whipping at his heels. The hiss of coins in a gunny sack.

Going Underground. Not perpetuating the past.

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  1. Frankie says

    August 13, 2025 at 6:48 am

    So powerful, especially in light of the way the world is moving.

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  2. Bud says

    August 13, 2025 at 1:56 pm

    Very descriptive and powerful!

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  3. Sharon Murphy says

    August 14, 2025 at 6:12 pm

    Powerful words.

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