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Rock On

October 10, 2016 5 Comments

Rock On

By Alex Z. Salinas

“I’m sayin you two versus me. To five. Five dollars. Coo?”

Just moments before, he’d approached them, this old man with a salt and pepper afro. Josh and Sanders furrowed their brows.

“Ight,” Josh said.

Sanders looked at the man’s shoes: AND1. Cheap.

“Make it, take it.”

The boys gave him space.

Ching. Ching. Ching.

The basketball touched only the rusted steel net.

Ching. Ching.

“Geezus,” said Sanders.

“Pay up, fellas.”

“You play pro?” Josh asked.

“How you think I paid for my baby?” he retorted, lifting up his shirtsleeve.

Dr. Jay was inscribed on his wrinkled bicep with ’70-’73 underneath.

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  1. Charise says

    October 10, 2016 at 10:49 am

    I loved the “salt and pepper Afro” description but didn’t get the reference, unfortunately.

    The slang seemed natural and well paced and carried the story well.

    I especially liked the use of “Ching” because it evoked a great sound in my mind.

    Reply
    • liz milne says

      October 10, 2016 at 3:19 pm

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Julius_Erving 🙂

      Reply
  2. Gina says

    October 10, 2016 at 12:45 pm

    May he keep hoopin it up! Highly enjoyable.

    Reply
  3. davejamesashton says

    October 10, 2016 at 10:27 pm

    Really well done

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    October 13, 2016 at 3:34 pm

    Wonderful–and great!

    Reply

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