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Rust and Regret

October 23, 2017 5 Comments

Rust and Regret

By Gaynor Jones

At the rear of the garage, under a paint-spattered tarpaulin, leaned the motorbike. Dust danced in thin shafts of light as he released it from its cover.

Rusted over. Goddammit.

He was going to ride it to Dover, and then jump the ferry. Black boots and black jacket. He was going to meet a girl, cherry lipped and charcoal eyed. He was going to taste the finest beer in Belgium and smoke the sweetest green in Amsterdam. He was going to climb mountains, cross deserts, shout out in the rain.

He was going to do a whole lot of things.

Goddammit.

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  1. John Notley says

    October 23, 2017 at 7:18 am

    He should have taken better care of it! Nice little story neatly summed up.

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  2. Anita Bodle says

    October 23, 2017 at 10:07 am

    I know the feeling! Great story.

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    • David Silver says

      October 23, 2017 at 1:58 pm

      Fab piece of writing.

      Reply
  3. Knyte7 says

    October 23, 2017 at 7:23 pm

    Nicely captures the sentiment that, “We usually regret the things we don’t do more than the things we do.”

    Reply
  4. Meghashri says

    October 23, 2017 at 10:08 pm

    Loved it!

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