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Saturday Morning

November 6, 2018 6 Comments

Saturday Morning

By Ben Nein

Cadence looked out at the purple-orange sky, a rare morning with a hazy sun visible. Turning to her chores she cleared the night’s ashfall and headed back into the house through the mudroom/airlock.

In the kitchen, the overhead light glinted off her mother’s scalp. Cadence remembered stories of her mother’s braided hair, but couldn’t picture it. She’d never seen long hair before.

“Can we go to the park today? I can see the sun.”

“Maybe honey. Maybe.” Cadence thought she saw tears in her mother’s eyes, but that couldn’t be right on a day like today. It was so beautiful out.

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  1. Don Tassone says

    November 6, 2018 at 7:06 am

    Ominous. Well done.

    Reply
    • Ben Nein says

      November 6, 2018 at 7:34 am

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  2. cascondaville says

    November 6, 2018 at 7:37 am

    Great images. Powerful story.

    Reply
  3. Susan says

    November 6, 2018 at 8:44 am

    A wonderful (but hopefully not prophetic) tale. Well done!

    Reply
  4. Dan says

    November 6, 2018 at 3:38 pm

    Thanks for that — it’s important to be reminded of the consequences of our recklessness.

    Reply
  5. Brian says

    November 7, 2018 at 4:14 pm

    An excellent story!

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