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Saturday Night Out

March 2, 2020 3 Comments

Saturday Night Out

By Lisa Friedlander

Saturday night. Harper’s head fell back on the couch forlornly. Nothing to do.

Monday he’d had bingo. Tuesday cards. Wednesday a Giant’s game and mucho beers with Jack. Thursday bowling and Friday he’d taken Bonnie to dinner.

He leaves his apartment and heads to his favorite sushi bar. An interminable line has formed.

Another block and a taxi deluges him while racing through a muddy puddle. Bonnie doesn’t return his text. Jack is blindly drunk. He nabs an Uber to see the latest comedy at Bosco’s. Sold out!

Back on his couch, headache booming, he’s got nothing to do. Praise be.

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  1. Mandira says

    March 2, 2020 at 7:30 am

    Loved this piece. Crisp and tidy!

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  2. Dew says

    March 2, 2020 at 10:48 am

    Been there, done that.

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  3. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    March 4, 2020 at 7:35 am

    Get a good feeling of mc desperate to fill emptiness. Lots of busyness, all falling apart on him.

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