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Saw It in a Movie

May 27, 2018 9 Comments

Saw It in a Movie

By Steve Lodge

Coffee at dawn. Wesley’s favourite. He stirred his coffee as he walked from his kitchen into the garden. He paused as, to his utter amazement, the carcass of a water buffalo lay on the lawn. His jaw and his cup dropped. Then the beast’s body split open and a man stepped out, gun in hand, and shot Wesley, killing him instantly.

Tony’s work bored him. He’d been in a course Increase Your Job Satisfaction. Tony’s fresh and innovative streak had begun with this painfully easy assignment. He wasn’t keen on the stickiness and blood from hiding in the water buffalo, though.

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  1. Susan says

    May 27, 2018 at 8:48 am

    Comical ending!

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    • nostalgicablog says

      May 28, 2018 at 11:37 am

      So happy you liked it, Susan. Thank you for your kind comment.

      Reply
  2. b. says

    May 27, 2018 at 12:43 pm

    Oh the unpleasantries of some jobs! Great little tale.

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    • nostalgicablog says

      May 28, 2018 at 11:39 am

      Thanks b. I’m happy you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.

      Reply
  3. Emma says

    May 27, 2018 at 3:37 pm

    Excellent! Unexpected perspective.

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    • nostalgicablog says

      May 28, 2018 at 11:45 am

      Many thanks for taking the trouble to comment, Emma. Really appreciated your kindness.

      Reply
  4. Mary E Falkner says

    May 28, 2018 at 5:12 am

    Brill!

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    • nostalgicablog says

      May 28, 2018 at 11:51 am

      Thank you very much, Mary. So happy you liked it.

      Reply
  5. Ellen says

    May 30, 2018 at 6:31 pm

    Hilarious and edgy. Well done.

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