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Scott

May 14, 2018 14 Comments

Scott

By Marjan Sierhuis

Scott slowly approached the visitor’s lounge. He saw her frail form, which had been ravaged by old age, sitting in a wheelchair.

He reached for one of her pale, cold hands. She cowered, appeared afraid, and immediately folded her arms across her chest. A look of surprise and puzzlement crossed her delicate features as she tilted her head from side to side.

Tired eyes that were partially blinded by cataracts searched his face for some sign of recognition.

“Who are you?” she whispered, her anguish palpable.

“It is not important, Mother,” he said softly as he frowned, turned, and walked away.

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  1. enchantedfairy says

    May 14, 2018 at 8:50 am

    Heartbreaking truths of aging 🙁

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    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 14, 2018 at 11:10 am

      Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

      Reply
  2. rauthor68 says

    May 14, 2018 at 9:26 am

    A better ending would have the son sitting down next to his mom.

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    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 14, 2018 at 11:16 am

      Thank you rauthor68 for taking the time to read my story and for your suggestion.

      Reply
  3. Susan says

    May 14, 2018 at 10:27 am

    It reminds me of a story a man told me about his mother. I can’t remember if she had dementia or Alzheimer’s disease. He was close to her, and she didn’t recognize him. He said how painfull it was to visit her.

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    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 14, 2018 at 11:18 am

      Thank you Susan for sharing.

      Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    May 14, 2018 at 11:57 am

    Wonderful and touching. I can relate to this because I recall visiting my mother in a nursing home and she asking me who I was. Give this one five stars!

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    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 14, 2018 at 12:21 pm

      Thank you Bobby for reading my story and sharing your own personal experience.

      Reply
  5. b. says

    May 14, 2018 at 1:13 pm

    I understand about the pain of not being recognized by a parent suffering mental problems. I have had to walk away because my pain was to much for either of us to bear. A well written and clear message.

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    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 14, 2018 at 2:06 pm

      Thank you B for sharing your painful experience. It took great courage on your part.

      Reply
  6. Meghashri says

    May 15, 2018 at 1:31 am

    Touching. So much pain, for both…

    Reply
    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 15, 2018 at 7:12 am

      Thank you for taking the time to read my story and commenting.

      Reply
  7. Mary E Falkner says

    May 15, 2018 at 4:41 pm

    All too true, alas.

    Reply
    • Marjan Sierhuis says

      May 15, 2018 at 5:23 pm

      Thank you Mary for taking the time to ready my story and commenting.

      Reply

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