By Felix Ward
My next-door neighbour Sheila was blessed with second sight, so she claimed. As a child I used to joke that she ought to have been given some first sight to go along with it, as she was nearly blind as a bat, and had spectacles so thick you couldn’t see her eyes through them. I remember being told off for making that joke. One day she actually beat me. Every single blow found its mark.
So, I put her to the test; I hid in her house and frightened her.
She died of a heart attack.
She didn’t see that coming.
I didn’t see it coming either. Good job.
I like it.
Dark humor..I love it.
LOL Loved it
I didn’t see it coming either. it’s marvelous writing that your reader has the same experience that Sheila did, although hopefully none of your readers take it to the extreme that Sheila did.
That seems to be one of the big troubles with being “psychic”: the paranormal person can often see what going to happen to someone else, but never to themselves. Good story.
Haha!
Creepy and well crafted! A well executed twist. 🙂