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Self-Help

August 22, 2024 4 Comments

By Ele Pawelski

She sidled up to the Self-Help section, sandwiched between Fiction and Psychology. Before, she’d only looked in the shop from outside. She pulled up her gray hoodie, chewed lace ends hanging to her chest.

Tilting her head sideways, titles assembled into advice a mother might give her daughter if the daughter had a mother. Hers had left when she was six. At first, she was angry at her mother, but when she got older, thought her courageous. Recently, they’d reunited, her mother saying she was better.

“Can I help you?” the shopkeeper asked.

“Yes.” She held out Adult Children of Alcoholics.

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  1. Mary Anne Gorman says

    August 22, 2024 at 7:18 am

    Ah, very moving, so well written to capture the sadness, and yet no blame came across…..it would make a tremendous longer story or even a book

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  2. Tim Goldstone says

    August 25, 2024 at 7:48 am

    Loved “…chewed lace ends hanging to her chest.”

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  3. Bud Pharo says

    August 28, 2024 at 10:14 am

    Very poignant and, unfortunately, all too familiar for many children.

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  4. Ed Kratz says

    August 28, 2024 at 1:13 pm

    Well done. Sort of an optomistic ending, considering the main character’s background.

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