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Shades of Dark

November 25, 2017 2 Comments

Shades of Dark

By M. Irene Hill

I still yearn for you, my love, especially on those feral nights when the moon is dark as a raven’s wing.

Trapped in that liminal place near the dark infinity, with a fistful of faded memories of you, and my decomposing dreams scratching against the coffin lid.

I remember the last time we visited. You brought roses; petals satin-soft and red, like the vital rush of blood. I kissed away your tears. Cried my own as I watched you leave. She was waiting for you in the car, after all.

Little corpses now, those black roses. Haunted by memories of you.

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  1. Roy Dorman says

    November 25, 2017 at 12:54 pm

    Very Poe-like, M. Irene, from the first sentence to the last. Excellent.

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    • mirenehill says

      November 25, 2017 at 4:36 pm

      Thank you so much for that fine compliment.

      Reply

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