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Shawn Dies

November 3, 2022 18 Comments

By Afra Samsudeen

Doctors surrounded him, trying to save Shawn’s life as his breath labored. Pain burned inside his chest, the cancer eating at his vigor. His eyes closed and the antiseptic taint of the hospital faded into rose and lilac, the aroma of romance and joy.

A blurry silhouette approached, sharpening into his wife who passed away in a car crash one year ago. With her windswept hair and hazel eyes, she still looked the same but freed from the burden of time. He held her hand, and his breath caught in his throat. The burning pain ceased. Finally reunited with his Charlotte.

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  1. Howard Dart Humeston says

    November 3, 2022 at 8:19 am

    A hopeful story well written.

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      November 3, 2022 at 11:04 am

      Thank you…

      Reply
  2. JK Hayward-Trout says

    November 3, 2022 at 11:11 am

    Flash perfection!

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    • Afra Samsudeen says

      November 4, 2022 at 11:37 am

      Thank you…Means a lot…

      Reply
  3. Derek says

    November 3, 2022 at 3:36 pm

    Good story.

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      November 4, 2022 at 11:37 am

      Thank you so much…

      Reply
  4. S says

    November 3, 2022 at 7:36 pm

    Good story

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      November 4, 2022 at 11:38 am

      Thanks…

      Reply
  5. Cathryn says

    November 3, 2022 at 8:19 pm

    Dear Afra,
    Agree with JK. Total flash perfecion!

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      November 4, 2022 at 11:38 am

      Aww…Thank you…

      Reply
      • Sathvika says

        November 6, 2022 at 9:34 am

        Beautiful story ?

        Reply
        • Afra Samsudeen says

          November 7, 2022 at 9:09 am

          Thank you, bestie…

          Reply
  6. Rabab says

    November 9, 2022 at 10:08 am

    Poignant.

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      January 21, 2023 at 11:45 am

      Thank you…

      Reply
  7. Dee Lorraine says

    November 10, 2022 at 11:38 am

    Well done, Afra.

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      January 21, 2023 at 11:46 am

      Thank you…

      Reply
  8. Jennifer J. says

    November 10, 2022 at 4:46 pm

    Beautiful!

    Reply
    • Afra Samsudeen says

      January 21, 2023 at 11:46 am

      Thank you…

      Reply

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