By Vijeni
It was always a fierce competition between the twins. Not an academic one. Or intellectual. Or sporty. But, they competed to bestow happiness on one another.
Hasini woke up to a birthday surprise—0:1
Suhasini’s wardrobe was filled with her favorite blue-colored clothes—38:34
Hasini got a pass to meet her favorite author—68:79
Suhasini was booked for an All India tour—86:83
Hasini had the best night in the lake with her sister—99:99
Suhasini woke up after her heart transplantation surgery. There was a rose bouquet, and a note.
I Win!
Really love this!
Thank you Laura 🙂
Ending ?
Thanks Avinash 🙂
So sweet and so emotional
Thanks Darlzzz 🙂
I liked this, it reminded me of a funny thought that struck me just before I gave my father’s eulogy – long story, but perhaps not too long for 101 some day. Nice job!
Thank you Beebles. Looking forward to read yours ?
Thank you Beebles. Looking forward to read yours ?
Beautiful short fiction in 101 words
Thank you Umeshkulkarni 🙂
Heart touching story…Your style of writing is amazing… U made my eyes sweat 🙂
Thank you Harini…It means a lot:)
Wonderfully written!
The last few words are quite heart-touching.
Thanks a lot Brahma uncle 🙂
Excellent. ???
Thank you Lakshminarayanan 🙂
Heart touching …
Congratulations dear..
Thank You dad:)
Wow! Wonderful story told in 101 words. I felt the power of the unexpected ending.
Thank you so much ruth mannino 🙂